Friday, October 1, 2010

Try to communicate clearly in an email to your TA or ELA. Post a copy of the email to your blog.

1.Here is my e-mail to my adviser.

Dear Mr. Litchfield



My name is Madina Abdrakhmanova. I am an international freshman majoring in Computer Science. I had an appointment with you yesterday, and asked how I can apply CS to architecture. You gave me the contacts of Professor Andrejasich and mentioned that you could give me feedback on my email draft to the professor and introduce me to him. Would you please review the document I attached? Thank you for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,
Madina Abdrakhmanova


2. The e-mail I attached:

Dear Professor Andrejasich

My name is Madina Abdrakhmanova. I am an international freshman majoring in Computer

Science. I was wondering if it would be possible to set up an appointment with you to discuss

ways in which I can apply my CS skills in the field of architecture. I am very interested in

architecture, particularly in the creation of computerized 3D models. It would be wonderful if

you could advise me as to how to go about pursuing this interest. Thank you for your time and

thoughtful consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards,

Madina Abdrakhmanova

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